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Rolando Andrade's avatar

Beautiful Trudi.

There is a hidden meaning

in every atom,

the secret code of the Universe,

we can feel it in every thing,

but remains a secret,

until a brilliant poet,

reveals to the World

the secret code that is hidden

in every hidden code

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

This is why I love poetry, Rolando. The codes it contains hold many meanings depending on who reads them.✨

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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Trudi, the imagery here is so compelling, the geometry of it that invokes a deeper meaning.

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

I like that idea, of the geometry- thank you, Heidi 🤗🌟

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Lori Ann Bloomfield's avatar

I may never see the horizon (which is my favourite view) quite the same way again! You have a talent for encasing deep truths in, seemingly, simple lines, Trudi! xo

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

A pleasure, Lori. I particularly liked that view of the horizon, through the arch.💕

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Old Codger Steve's avatar

I asked myself the how do I read sparks of light

I read once then ponder

I read 2/3 times more to let it rest with me

Sometimes I comment

Sometimes not but pressing the like button never seems enough

I was searching for a word

Then it came to me

Sparks of light ….

Bedazzles

Apparently a word from Shakespeare

Just saying. Thankyou

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

Bedazzles! That's a jewel of a word, Steve! I'm honoured.✨💕✨

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Old Codger Steve's avatar

For a jewel of a poet. But like the original meaning better

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

I had to look it up! The Taming of the Shrew? I saw that years ago with Josie Lawrence playing the shrew. It was brilliant!

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Old Codger Steve's avatar

My guess is you would take some taming but clearly the analogy stops there

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

Ha! Quite right!

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Simone Kornalijnslijper's avatar

This is beautiful and so profound ✨🧡

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

I appreciate you saying so, Simone ✨

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C.J. Heck's avatar

I love your poem, Trudi. You pose some good questions.

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

I liked the questions too, C.J. Not too sure what the answers are? ✨

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C.J. Heck's avatar

LOL I would have to spend some time thinking about those! LOL

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

😂same!

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Diana van Eyk's avatar

A wonderful and evocative poem, Trudi. Thank you.

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

Diana, I am happy you enjoyed this poem.✨

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Simone Senisin's avatar

Fabulous 😊

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

Thank you! 🤗✨

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Physique Culturist's avatar

Familiar scene 😊 … always more difficult to be one of the few.

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Trudi Nicola's avatar

You speak from experience ✨

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