Stacked
The odds were stacked against us If only we had known We might have paid attention And not wandered far from home But city lights were twinkling The noise, the fun, the din And like moths towards a flame We were drawn further in The days of work were endless The nights were longer still Out on the tiles, like alley cats We danced and drank our fill But that proverbial candle Burned down both ends too soon We lost our way, found out too late We'd whistled the wrong tune The odds were stacked against us For naivety, we paid Returning home without a hope Our foolishness displayed



Your poem made me look back on my journey. I felt nostalgia and joy, because in 2004 I had a very serious illness. And even though the odds were against me, here I am, even though I paid the price... it was worth it.
A powerful lesson learned!