Thank you for your poem, Trudi. Itβs very evocative and full of powerful imagery. The storms within roar loudly inside us, the turmoil we feel is called fear
Greetings Traci, a womenβs alienation that destroys her sense of wholeness, is a fundamental crisis, which I have lived through. The fear in lived reality, the βStormβ stripping me into nakedness. In my vulnerability there was the thread of golden opportunity for new growth and a deeper sense of self acceptance and my worthiness. I know the βStormβ itβs a poem as prayer, thank you Traci for finding the rhyming voice to express the journey of self discovery.
I can really feel this Trudi, l know this place. You capture it. ππΌππ
Itβs within each of us. I know you know. Thank you, Simone β¨
Oh yes, l know πβ€οΈβπ©Ήβ€οΈ
So powerful, Trudi. The imagery is felt in every word and we are all looking for that rock.
We are indeed, Heidi!πβ¨
Thank you for your poem, Trudi. Itβs very evocative and full of powerful imagery. The storms within roar loudly inside us, the turmoil we feel is called fear
Thank you, Rolando. Sometimes itβs fear, sometimes itβs grief. β¨
Holding you in love through the storm. may we look up/within and see that lighthouse that guides us safely home.
May it be so!β¨
Storms rage within my heartβ¦The beginning of this poem, it describes a fury of pain. Trudi, this is one of your best. Thank youβ¨
Thank you so much, Jo-Ann. Yes, a fury of pain. That describes it perfectly β¨
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This resonated deeply, feeling the frustration and loneliness being in a dark place. Thank goodness the rocks are there for us when we most need them.
Thank you, Val. Thankful for the rocks and the respite π€β¨
What a vivid and dramatic poem! May rocks and rainbows appear for all who need them. xo
May it be so!β¨
Greetings Traci, a womenβs alienation that destroys her sense of wholeness, is a fundamental crisis, which I have lived through. The fear in lived reality, the βStormβ stripping me into nakedness. In my vulnerability there was the thread of golden opportunity for new growth and a deeper sense of self acceptance and my worthiness. I know the βStormβ itβs a poem as prayer, thank you Traci for finding the rhyming voice to express the journey of self discovery.
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Thank you, Geraldine, for sharing how this resonates. I appreciate you.β¨π€
This poem resonates so deeply π©΅
I am pleased you read this one, Georg.β¨
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Thank you, Sean. I hope you are keeping well.β¨
I still feel this deeply sometimes..thank you, Trudi. ππ©΅
These storms come and go. Thank you for reading this one, Grace.πβ¨
So beautifully expressed, Trudi. Thank you.
My pleasure, Diana.β¨