Written

[Old Codger Steve]

Not a believer or a fatalist I be

This still touched as you will see

Yes surrender to your heart

Let your spirit free

Because to love unconditionally

Is the only way for me

And whatever will be will be

Lovely verses from our now published poetess

[Trudi Nicola]

And an equally lovely verse in feedback from you, Steve! Thank you! 🤗✨

[Grace Drigo]

🩷🩷

[Trudi Nicola]

Thank you, Grace ❤️✨

[C.J. Heck]

Very nice, Trudi!

[Trudi Nicola]

Thank you, C.J.🤗✨

[Jo-Ann Petrarca]

It is written 🙏…

[Trudi Nicola]

It is ... 💞✨

[Kathleen Hobbs]

Your poem feels very calming. I love the reminder to trust the path and listen to the quiet.

[Trudi Nicola]

We do need the reminders sometimes, or I do, Kathleen! Thank you!🤗

[Lori Ann Bloomfield]

Oh, Trudi I love this poem! It is the truth that I live (or try to). Gorgeous and wise words.

[Trudi Nicola]

I'm so pleased you love it! Let this one be for you 💞🤗

[Heidi Zawelevsky]

Fantastic. I love the progression here, that leads to the act of our surrender. My favorite line is, "Relax your grip on your direction".

[Trudi Nicola]

Ah but that line is so hard to do! Thank you, Heidi.💞

[Vivienne Helen]

So so true Trudi.

To surrender is our goal.

Experiencing the magic that follows💫💜💫💜

[Trudi Nicola]

Yes! here's to the magic that follows! Thank you, Vivienne.💞

[Old Codger Steve]

Naw.

Class is Class m'lady

Just perhaps a fledging beginner, maybe

Actually inspired by you

If I may say so

[Trudi Nicola]

You may, and I am delighted this is so✨