I loved the way you read it! This is absolutely amazing, Trudi, the rhythm, the imagery, the energy! I felt like I was spinning through the stars with you. That final line, ‘a living Lemniscate’, is breathtaking. Pure poetic exuberance. Your voice brought it all to life even more, it carried the joy and motion so beautifully. A real delight to listen to! 🥰😍✨️❤️
Thank you, Saira! I have a day's leave and wanted to start it with a new poem. I am so pleased you like it. Spinning through the stars is something I would love to experience!✨
My pleasure! Good morning! What a perfect way to start your day off, Trudi, and such a stunning piece to begin with. I hope today brings you the same joy and light your poem gave me. Spinning through the stars really does sound like pure magic! ✨
What a wonderful rush of energy transformed into poetry. That's how it felt to me, Trudi. Also, I was dead impressed you landed on 'lemniscate.' (Beat that Yeats. lol)
Beautiful Trudi, like an enchantment spoken with your charming English accent, well done with a Shakespearean flair💥
Ahhh Geraldine, you are so kind! Thank you for listening to this one.✨
Of course, how could I not!
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I loved the way you read it! This is absolutely amazing, Trudi, the rhythm, the imagery, the energy! I felt like I was spinning through the stars with you. That final line, ‘a living Lemniscate’, is breathtaking. Pure poetic exuberance. Your voice brought it all to life even more, it carried the joy and motion so beautifully. A real delight to listen to! 🥰😍✨️❤️
Thank you, Saira! I have a day's leave and wanted to start it with a new poem. I am so pleased you like it. Spinning through the stars is something I would love to experience!✨
My pleasure! Good morning! What a perfect way to start your day off, Trudi, and such a stunning piece to begin with. I hope today brings you the same joy and light your poem gave me. Spinning through the stars really does sound like pure magic! ✨
Bravo, Trudi! I love how your words and this painting go so well together - particularly that enchanting and exuberant last verse:
"A dance of abandon, a wildness within
A swirling surrender as the universe spins
Arms stretching, triumphant, leg raised I create
A sense of eternity, a living lemniscate"
I liked that last verse, too Martin! Thank you for commenting - it means a lot! ✨🌟
What a wonderful rush of energy transformed into poetry. That's how it felt to me, Trudi. Also, I was dead impressed you landed on 'lemniscate.' (Beat that Yeats. lol)
Haha yes! I wanted to get that word in as I could sense it there in the painting! Thank you, Lori ✨🤗
Thank you, Trudi, for another enthralling poem in this collaborative series. It works on so many levels to inspire and expand us.
Heidi I’m so glad you’ve read this one and find the collaboration inspiring! Michaels Space Series is a source of deep inspiration for me.✨
Trudi, so much of what you poetically express, I feel with deep emotional respect. Thank you for being one of the light workers on this earth!
Jo-Ann - thank you for seeing it and for supporting my poetry. It means so much! 🌟✨
You’re always welcome. 😊
The rhythm, the rhyme, the everything! Love 💕
Yay! So pleased you love it, Carolyn ❤️✨