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Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Trudi, I hear the call throughout this beautiful poem, so evocative and moving.

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Thank you so much, Heidi! 🤗✨

Jo-Ann Petrarca's avatar

Exquisite

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Thank you, Jo-Ann ✨🌟

Julie Dee's avatar

Beautiful sentiment, seamlessly expressed x

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Thank you, Julie! I appreciate you saying that 🤗✨

Julie Warfield's avatar

I called upon my appreciative heart to let you know how beautiful you are.💝✨️

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Julie! How kind! Thank you ✨

Rolando Andrade's avatar

I love it Trudi. A kind of pray, or a sing maybe... I read it as a wish of someone hoping for a better world

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It does sound like a prayer or a song, Rolando. I agree. Thank you!✨

Michael Newberry's avatar

🙌

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Thank you, Michael! ✨

Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Trudi, I love it all, but especially this verse

I call upon the starry skies

To witness truth and stamp out lies

To witness those we will forgive

And through atonement, all will live

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Kathleen I’m delighted you love it! That verse spoke to me, too.🤗✨

Alegria de Rose's avatar

Trudi, this is absolutely beautiful. It is like a prayer for our world. Thank you for sharing your soulful words, so beautifully expressed.

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Alegria, you are welcome. It was a poem I enjoyed writing. Thank you!💞

Lori Ann Bloomfield's avatar

I loved reading it and then listening to you read it to us. Beautiful! May your prayers be answered. xo

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Thank you, Lori! I hope they are✨💞

Carole Roseland's avatar

Wonderful, Trudi, both in message and in form!

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Carole, thank you so much! That means a lot.🤗💞

Sean Griobhtha's avatar

🥰

Old Codger Steve's avatar

A deeper more reflective poem from Trudi.

" To witness truth and stamp out lies".........

" To save us from this sorry mess " ( yes please!)

" To teach us what it takes to grow"

Sits well with me especially as it takes its comfort from nature.

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Happy that it sits well with you, Steve. Thank you for taking the time to read it!✨

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Always

Vivienne Helen's avatar

Beautiful!

And so lovely to hear your Yorkshire accent, which resonates with the Soul in me✨️

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Ahhh thank you, Vivienne! Glad you enjoyed it!