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Old Codger Steve's avatar

Like tempered tears

Holding back a bleeding heart

That only wants to live again

Love again

Lovely Poetry Trudi, as always

Trudi Nicola's avatar

Your addition is beautiful, Steve. Take it and continue the theme! Love it!💞✨

Old Codger Steve's avatar

Thank you

Just might do that

You are always an inspiration to me

Cross polination for sure

Just such a tough but beautiful act to follow

A mere pretender here

Trudi Nicola's avatar

Nope - we all start with words from the heart, Steve. No pretending about it.

Heidi Zawelevsky's avatar

Beautiful, Trudi. I love the pacing.

Trudi Nicola's avatar

Thank you, Heidi! ✨

Rolando Andrade's avatar

Every day, the sun seduces the clouds with warm kisses on their necks. Every day, the sun and the moon, day and night, the sky and the clouds play the game of life and death.

Trudi Nicola's avatar

Beautiful, Rolando ✨

Geraldine A. V. Hughes's avatar

Heralds the arrival of morning, a lovely balmy poem, dear Trudi. May all be well with you and yours 💛 Geraldine

Trudi Nicola's avatar

Thank you for these kind words, Geraldine! 🥰✨

Dawn Benedict's avatar

Lovely, Trudi! 💞

Trudi Nicola's avatar

Glad you think so, Dawn! ✨

Lori Ann Bloomfield's avatar

How beautiful! What a gorgeous, poetic remeinder that the sun will always shine on us again. (And I hope it is shining on you!) xo

Trudi Nicola's avatar

The sun did shine! Thank you, Lori-Ann ✨

C.J. Heck's avatar

I does seem like that's what's going on. Well done, Trudi.

Then it will be Shine, Shine, Shine

Trudi Nicola's avatar

I hope so, C.J. ✨

C.J. Heck's avatar

🙏🙏🙏

Georg Cook's avatar

Stunning 🩵

Trudi Nicola's avatar

Ahhh thank you so much, Georg!✨💞

Allegra's avatar

Beautiful !🙏

Trudi Nicola's avatar

Good morning and thank you, Allegra!✨🙏

Simone Senisin's avatar

Hi Trudi, "... tentatively hold back their burden of rain ...", love that well, the whole poem 😊. No such holding back here, plenty of rain. Have a great day. 🙏

Trudi Nicola's avatar

You have rain? I hope it is refreshing! Have a great day, too, Simone!💞

Simone Senisin's avatar

Yes, we are quickly sliding through Autumn down this end of our beautiful planet … your day opens as mine closes 💖

Trudi Nicola's avatar

Ahh - at least one of us is always awake and shining a light - we have the clock covered!

Geraldine A. V. Hughes's avatar

Sweet!

Simone Senisin's avatar

Lovely 🥰